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#1 User is offline   zolabee 

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 03:11 PM

Laying here, my body well used I, Alexandra Mackey, wonder how this was the place that I ended up. It was not my intention. At one time, my life was good. I had a husband, a daughter and a wonderful job. Then change came upon our small town. It was such a small change, a few people moving in, no one would have guessed that its repercussions would reshape the fabric of our community.

Let me tell you my story…

It started long before my birth. This place, Ville de Peche’, translates from French to city of sin. It was not what the founding fathers had in mind when they came here. They named us Crique de Rue Agnes. St. Agnes Cove named for St. Agnes obviously, the patron saint of chastity and virgins. It was their dream to build the perfect city.

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Unfortunately for them, the dream didn’t last long when pirates hit the cove… well, let’s just say the town got a new nickname that evolved into its name. Years passed, and once the age of pirating died down, Ville de Peche was left standing. It wasn’t long until the citizens rallied and a strong community came together each contributing to the town’s survival.

We were doing rather nicely until recently the economy took a downturn leaving many of us out of work, wondering how we would survive. Getting fired from the job that I loved was one of the biggest heartbreaks of my life, or so I thought at the time.


Several new families moved in from other struggling towns, and then a new group came to town. They were looking for something or somebody and decided this would be a great place to call home base while they started the search. Who would guess that these men would lead to my downfall? Not, I.
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I was at home when some of the men came to my house. My husband was at work and my daughter at school. They were looking for a man and woman – no one I had ever seen - their colleagues who had gone missing from a small town in the middle of the desert. Why they were looking here, I couldn’t imagine and it was hard to concentrate with so much male testosterone in the air. I was speechless, never having seen such handsome men before… and that my dear friend was the beginning of the end.
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My, don’t I wish Gabe had half of what these guys have, or so I thought to myself at the time. It wasn’t long before the mild flirting began and I’m ashamed to say that I was flattered that such handsome men would deign to even look twice at me. It didn’t take long for it to go one step and then another - further than I had intended. I was left breathless… needless to say it went downhill fast. Before anything irreparable could happen, the school bus drove up and gave me the incentive to chase them out of my house, but from the look on their faces they would be back.
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I told my daughter, Jules , that I didn’t feel well, to fix herself a snack while I rested. But, let me tell you there was no resting going on, my body was so tense it was all I could do to lie there. What would I do if they did come back? But, then to my horror, I thought what if they didn’t? With a sinking feeling in my stomach, I knew my world was about to get rocked, I just could never have imagined the road that it would take.
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Posted 07 March 2009 - 03:47 PM

:popcorn: Love the start!

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 03:53 PM

:yahoo: Great start! :popcorn2:
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Posted 07 March 2009 - 04:31 PM

Wonderful,

if she doesn't watch it though, she will have more than a sinking feeling in her stomach...

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 04:58 PM

Yep, it'll be that damn flu bug that seems to be going around. :teehee:
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Posted 07 March 2009 - 09:59 PM

Part 2

Back again for more of my sad tale are you? Well, you’ll have to wait your turn. A girl has to make a living when she has someone depending on her.

Later…

Still here are you? Wanting to know how I ended up here? Well, it all goes back to those lovely men. I told you, didn’t I, about how I wondered if they would come back. Yes, they did, and I wish to high heaven that they hadn’t. It didn’t take long for me to mire myself deeper in their web of seduction, passion and, for lack of a better word, lust. Soon they were coming every day and I was giving them everything that they wanted thinking it was better than I’d ever had before.

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Birth control pills were my friend. What I didn’t know though, was that as soon as those bastards figured out that I was on them, they replaced them with fakes. It wasn’t long before I was down with a virus, or so I thought.
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I was safe in my mind from any consequences of my actions. Worse, I had been so caught up with my new toys… I hadn’t been paying attention to my husband.

Several things happened in such a short space. One afternoon, I let the time get away from me, and Jules caught me in the act.
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She was hysterical.
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I couldn’t calm her down, so just sent her to her room thinking that everything would be fine once we could talk about it and I could fix this.

Then, no sooner than I had gotten rid of the men, Gabe came home from work. Jules was crying hysterically, and suddenly my belly popped out.
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Oh, my… I’ve never seen anyone so hurt - or mad, and hope to never again. He slapped me silly

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and threw me out of the house.
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Where was I to go? I didn’t even know the address of my “friends.”

The community park was where I ended up. Sitting on the bench, zoning out in shock, I thought to myself, ‘abandoned and pregnant, what am I to do?’

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 10:11 PM

Somebody go in that house and move them damn flowers...<g>

Nice, on a side note, I did not know that outfit worked with a pregnant belly... Oh, and I don't like guys who hit girls, no matter the provocation, Gabe just took a step down my list.

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 10:26 PM

In reality, she hit him first they just hate each other... and while I can play the JokersWild... I just can't post the full naked in action pictures... Talk about embarrassment... must be my southern roots showing... I about went and hid when I posted that one glitchy picture in the Adult section... *sigh* So... use your imagination, it'll will work better than any picture... at least for now.
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Posted 07 March 2009 - 10:37 PM

To me that doesn't matter, that she hit him, it deson't enter into the equation at all, there is no provocation that is justifiable to me... Of course these are only game chars but it still bugs me whenever it happens.

You should see me when the kids play one of those fighting games on the PS3, I have to leave the room. I find myself almost yelling at my son for hitting a girl...<g>

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 11:21 PM

Damn, he booted her out on her ass. She should have kept her britches on! Then she wouldn't be in the mess she's in.
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Posted 08 March 2009 - 12:39 AM

True, but I sure don't blame her for getting distracted by them! *fans self*

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Posted 08 March 2009 - 04:23 AM

what a great start! I want MORE :popcorn:



and ugh, to the girl/boy slapping/fighting. I fixed their relationship a little so they would stop trying to fight with each other every time I loaded their lot. I don't like the boy/boy fighting either but I hate when the guys slap the girls. Too bad there isn't a "no hitting girls" hack.

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Posted 08 March 2009 - 05:18 AM

I :crylaugh: at the comment Trif made about the flowers. May be it’s a guy thing that you want it all. I some times find the tease shot conveys much more than the full on in your face shot can. (pun intended. <eg>)
Well done Zola It gave you a real sense she was doing something shameful that she could not help. :good:
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Posted 08 March 2009 - 06:10 AM

What a great start, Zola. I loved your artistic flowers :)

Poor thing. I hope her drama queen daughter is happy now.

Trif I think I'm in love with you for your comments about the hitting. :wub:


I almost forgot. I loved that first shot of the sandcastle and the surf. Lovely.

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Posted 08 March 2009 - 06:43 AM

Now we know why every one cases him.
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Posted 08 March 2009 - 09:22 AM

View PostTrif, on Mar 7 2009, 10:11 PM, said:

Nice, on a side note, I did not know that outfit worked with a pregnant belly... Oh, and I don't like guys who hit girls, no matter the provocation, Gabe just took a step down my list.



Trif, over at MTS2 somebody has made pregnant meshes for most of the EA clothes - needless to say - I got them. I was going to link to them and will when I can find them again. *sigh*


Also, I don't think anyone hitting is okay, but every conversation they started in it was either one thing *think JokersWild* or the other - fighting. It made for a great story device - except she was supposed to be neglecting her husband! And if her head hadn't been literally in the toilet or some other inconvenient place, I would have tried to work it in the story. *Gabe is not the babies father*

We will see later what Jules is up to when we revisit the original Mackey *I dropped the O* household in a different story. :yank:


Figwit... I loved that shot also, it seemed to represent the "perfect" town... yet with the surf, you know it's not going to be perfect long...
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Posted 08 March 2009 - 12:06 PM

:ilikeit:

When can we expect more?
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Posted 08 March 2009 - 08:34 PM

Part 3
Still here? Listen and learn. Looking back, I’ve come to realize that there is no such thing as coincidence. It wasn’t too long before one of the guys “stumbled” onto me sitting in the park. He was very sympathetic and so sorry for all the trouble that they had caused. Their boss had started buying some Real Estate and might have a small house that I could stay – just until I got on my feet of course. Oh, yes, and since it was just a temporary, it was in kind of bad shape. At that point I was desperate and went with him.

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You should have seen my new home. The only thing good about it was that it sat on the beach, and was partially furnished. I inwardly shuddered when I saw it, but what was a girl to do. He showed me around and took me for a short walk on the beach, it wasn’t long before more of his friends showed up.
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It took even shorter time for them to expect me to show them my appreciation. Fool that I was, I did -

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never noticing that as they left some of them dropped money on the table
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Posted 08 March 2009 - 08:49 PM

:popcorn:

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Posted 08 March 2009 - 08:51 PM

and so she gets paid for it...

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Posted 08 March 2009 - 08:52 PM

It is named Regrets...
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Posted 08 March 2009 - 09:12 PM

Oh my my, she has no idea what is in store for her. :teehee:
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Posted 09 March 2009 - 12:26 AM

:popcorn:

I seem to be out of popcorn tonight with all the great stories I've been reading tonight.

Wonderful Zolabee! More More More!

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Posted 09 March 2009 - 12:28 AM

Ok. Her situation is not good but at least she gets Sleepy's gorgeous men. My poor whores had to put up with the likes of Komei and Benjamin Long when I had a brothel. B)

That is one ugly house.

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Posted 09 March 2009 - 01:41 AM

I bet if Komei and Benjamin come along, she will really have some regrets.

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